2014 Portrait of a vampire II

Now give me your critique. I demand it. Now. I love critique. It's so awesome <3

A vampire. Again. She's a character I am going to introduce in my story. Seriously. I would like to translate this story and submit to Deviantart, but my grammar is so bad I can't do it.
Lady, I hope you don't mind being a vampire for now. You are so pretty I couldn't resist.

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Inspirations: Based on my imagination, vampire-themed literature and listened music.
Time: a couple of hours.
Tools of crime: Photoshop, SAI and PENTAGRAM.
Soundtrack: Rotting Christ, Moonspell, Eluveitie, Żywiołak.
I hope you like it.
Thus, I hate writing ACs.

Stock:

model La-Esmeralda-Stock [LINK] Photographer: Heiner Seemann.
background photo of mine
candleholder 1 camelfobia [LINK]
candleholder 2 YBsilon-Stock [LINK]
candle zememz [LINK]
flames roula33 [LINK]

Everything else that is not listed in stock, was done/painted by me.